


Broken Pride, Shattered Spirit

by Firemoon



Category: Zoids
Genre: Poetry
Language: English
Status: In-Progress
Published: 2003-08-01
Updated: 2003-08-01
Packaged: 2013-06-16 16:42:12
Rating: K
Chapters: 1
Words: 314
Publisher: www.fanfiction.net
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1456335/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/173148/Firemoon
Summary: A short poem about a random person.. maybe Raven.





	Broken Pride, Shattered Spirit

**Disclaimer:** DON¡¯T OWN ¡®EM. So DON¡¯T SUE ME

**Rating:** G

Broken Pride, Shattered Spirit 

**By. Firemoon**

Long have I crept on my broken wings,

Once strong and peerless, my life barely clings.

_Broken pride, shattered spirit,_

_Blown-up dreams, perished merit._

The unreachable sky; I look up, musing, ¡®I cannot make it.¡¯

My mind flies high into open blue, while my limbs dully onto golden sand hit.

_Broken pride, shattered spirit,_

_Blown-up dreams, perished merit._

My life¡¯s memory flicks past, some indifferent, some sorrowful,

Also that of blurred vision, a faint memory, too painful.

_Broken pride, shattered spirit,_

_Blown-up dreams, perished merit._

I feel my life slipping away, like flowing water,

Grasp onto it, and it falls faster, leaving my face, a little whiter.

_Broken pride, shattered spirit,_

_Blown-up dreams, perished merit._

O father, come take me away,

Already before me, the white demons play.

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A/N: Er, did you enjoy the poem? [is THIS?] Er, basically it¡¯s just a random person although I-after reading this through again-thought it could be Raven [hey, who would call their papa as they die other than him? – no offence meant. I¡¯m Raven Fan too.] 

And, the White demon thing is just that first, I tried to write red, then I thought of Hiltz0_o;; So I decided to write blue then it was Rizeo_0;; ¡¦¡¦¡¦¡¦¡¦So THAT¡¯S why I wrote white, and also implying that he could POSSIBLY go to heaven. [you know, WHITE? ANGELS?]

Yeah, I hope you enjoyed this, and REVIEW & FLAMES, STONES WELCOMED!!!!!!


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